[FEEDBACK] My First Attempts At Building and 3D Modelling

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#22

Yeah, exactly, but for the amount of time you spent on blender your doing a great job!

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#23

Thanks man, I appreciate the kind words and Iā€™m looking forward to more advanced builds in the near future, Iā€™m always thinking of new things to create :slight_smile:

#24

not bad but why the apple so big then a leaf tree and why the map are using the bright colour???

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#25

Oh the apple is so big because itā€™s in a fantasy land with big apples I guess, the lighting is all sorts of messed up because I donā€™t know how to do lighting and the tree is leaf because I donā€™t know how to import textures yet and itā€™s the best fit I could find.

#26

Wait a leaf tree, do you mean the leaves on the tree or a tree made of leaves? Iā€™m pretty sure leaves are meant to be on the end of trees before and after winter

#27

looks very good :+1: i think it would look even better if you would put low poly grass there.

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#28

Nice job on this build especially for a first timer, Iā€™m pretty sure the lighting is because of blender and Iā€™m sure you can get the hang of it once you get used to it.

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#29

Some of the ā€œcurvesā€ look kind of blocky, and you could make the lighting a little lighter, otherwise itā€™s good! :smiley:

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#30

I will try out your suggestion thank you

#31

Iā€™m playing around with the lighting to find a better setup rn

#32

Iā€™m thinking about redoing the trees for a more realistic mesh or going down the low poly route

#34

Omg, these look amazing. I canā€™t believe this was your first time. Theyā€™re WAY better than my first builds. :eyes:

Edit: me realising post being withdrawn

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#35

? Itā€™s not getting withdrawn it says I canā€™t withdraw without it being flagged so Iā€™ll let the topic die out

#36

Well, I see that you use two different terrain styles. Maybe just stick to one of them instead of using both. Also, lightning could be a little bluer and lighter.

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#37

Iā€™m going to fix the lighting today and change all the images thanks for the feed back, Iā€™m also working on a new low poly border

#38

Your first build is better then my 1000th build.
Did you practice building before you made this?
You could try experimenting with the lighting.
Anyways it is a very nice build, nothing else to say!!

#39

You sure this is only your first try? That is better than anything I can make and I have like 3 years of studio experience. But Iā€™m not really a builder, anyways good job tho!

(also path has gaps in it :eyes:)

#40

everything looks AMAZING, especially since itā€™s your first attempt at building butā€¦ I personally am not a big fan of this
I donā€™t like how itā€™s a big change and it comes from nothingā€¦ other than that, everything else is AMAZING!!! I love it!! keep up the great work and good luck! :grin:

#41

I didnt practice before i just decided to go in blind and see what i could come up with, im still trying to find the best lighting and i have a big surprise ive been working hard on coming up soon

#42

Im going to revise the path as that is the first mesh i ever made in blender so its really rough.
Thank you for your feedback.

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