[FEEDBACK] my first build

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#1

hello, this is my first ever serious build. keep in mind it is NOT FINISHED, I’m just seeing if I’m on the right track or what I should change before I go to far :slight_smile: . p.s only free model used is the grates for the ceiling shelves.

info: i’m going for a café type of build, and im trying semi realistic type of build

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#2

In future posts, kindly provide more information such as:

  • What this build is?
  • What are you aiming for?
  • What’s the theme of the build?
  • Source of inspiration? (Optional)
    Etc.

This is to get as much feedback as possible, as not much can be said about this aside from general/vague comments.

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#3

Looks cool already, very realistic.

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#4

I’m not really sure what this build is, but I’m gonna assume that it’s some sort of modern and luxurious house. I’m guessing that the thin stairs on the second image leads to the front door of the house, which is pretty unique. I kinda expect this build to have a pool under the house around this spot:
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That’s all I could give right now since I don’t really know what you are aiming for here. I apologize if I had mistaken your build for a house as well.

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#5

lol, its a café, I edited that into the description, the stairs lead to the larger tables, and its all good, its my first build so I was expecting it to be bleh anyway xd :joy: also where you circled is the bench, I just haven’t modelled any equipment yet

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#6

This looks awesome dude,keep doing work like this and you’ll get noticed in no time.

This is a quote i found
“You need to be a beginner before you become anything else”

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#7

In my opinion this looks amazing considering it’s your first ever build cant wait to see updates!

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#8

You should try and include more colours in the build, it looks too plain at the moment.

#9

Try to make it more realistic it just looks like a modern house throwing a party because of all those tables.

#10

It looks semi realistic just like you said in the description. Considering the fact its your first build
I would like to give some tips;

  • Everything, everytime doesnt need to be perfect.
  • Try to make it less boxy and a little rounds or something at the corners.
  • Always make a list or map before building.
  • Search google or go to real life cafe to observe how real cafe works if you are trying to achieve realism.
  • Using free modles is fine but dont make it a habit
  • Keep building.

I know it is not finished and I am exited to see future updates :smiley:

#11

hi, thank you for the feedback, I added a island, but I’m not sure I like it, I think I’m going to re do it as well as the pier. What do you think?

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#12

Yeah I like the Idea of island, looks neat!
Keep practising.

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