[FEEDBACK] My first build

Hi my name is Frostbrytes and this is the first build I’ve done so far. Please give feedback this took many days :slight_smile: all feedback is appreciated!



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I really like the poles! Amazing job m’dude! Some suggestions are to maybe make the top/bottom a little bit more detailed, like add another layer? Other than that, it looks AMAZING as your first build! You’ll be a great builder!

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Why is there a blue line going through the structure in the image[the last one]

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Probably just the selection lines.

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whoops my bad on the screenshot

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The pillar’s placement is quite uneven so I guess you either messed it up or just set the studs to 0.
I see that it is a book in the middle and it feels like the inside of the circle is too empty.

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For your first build it is very good but the only thing i would say is what suuzv said the pillar’s placement looks fairly uneven, so if you fix that this can probably be selling material and something a developer will use in there game, but it does need a bit of editing to make it better eg the pillar’s mainly.

Good luck for the future.

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The pillars have a fair amount of detail put into them, however the floor and roof have very little. Try adding some more depth and layers into them.

No idea if that is good or bad, but if you ask me, it’s amazing

For your first build? Wow… that’s pretty good for your first build. I like what you built and it looks good but needs some improvements, some of the other people added the things needed to or should be fixed so just look for their comments too.

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I also have to say… it looks like a small museum but outdoors kind of.

Amazing detail for a first build! You could go on landscaping around this build afterwards!

Looks great for a first build. Keep up the good work! Do try adding some more detail to the roof though as others have said, it would even out the detail seen from the pillars.

Looks really nice especially for a first build! I’d try looking into how to do archs it would look really nice with that build.

Anyone got suggestions on how to make statues from rigs since animation editor is broken?

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Very nice! Not bad for a first build, better then mine, keep playing with studio the more you play with it the better your building skills get. :smiley: