Okay so this is my first ever cafe build, and I think i did an okay job
Let me know what you think about it by giving me feedback! 
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I don’t know if this just me and my eye’s or does it look blurry?
- Try adding some chairs and tables inside.
Over all looks good.
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Yeah i added a bit too much blur lol, but overall thanks for feedback!
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I think you need to make a door for the cafe. Anyway the cafe look good to me.
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Wow, the interior decorations look pretty decent, together with some of the furniture, so great job for that! More chairs and tables can be added on the inside to fill up the empty space. Have you thought of adding a second storey too? I feel like that could turn out very well. Lastly, you can also add a door the front. Anyways, all the best for your builds and nice job!
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Wow! thank you , honestly , i didn’t expect such a great compliment
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It Looks Wonderful!
For Your First Cafe Build It Looks Very Good. But Have You Tried Placing Some Tables And Chairs Inside? And Making A Door For The Cafe?
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Amazing job on the exterior. I’d recommend filling up the spaces in the interior and possibly adding decorations outside and inside the cafe. I’d also recommend adding textures to the floor and the walls inside as the wood planks don’t really suit a cafe theme. Other than that I love it and I can see potential with this.
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The exterior isn’t interesting as it’s just a box with some windows. The inside should probably have some more chairs and other things to make it less blank. 
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Good for your first build, but I have a couple if tips that could really help you out.
First off, it looks like you skipped straight to detailing with your cafe. Art is usually broken down into steps, the biggest ones being the Primary shapes (Big ones), Secondary shapes (Medium ones) and Tertiary shapes (Small ones). It looks like you skipped your secondary shapes and went straight to your small shapes. The areas I have circled in red on your cafe are tertiary shapes that should be saved for a later step.
^^^^ This is a practical example of tertiary secondary and primary shapes.
This is a common problem and makes a lot of builds look wrong, with the builder not knowing why. Instead of jumping right into building, try blocking out your building using basic shapes, and once the silhouette looks fine, you can jump into adding detail and coloring it. I like the use of colors in this, as you seem to have a good grasp of contrast.
Try looking into some composition and color theory concepts, as they could help you in your building of cafes as well.
You could also find a good color scheme for your cafe by going to Create a Palette - Coolors, one of my favorite websites for generating color schemes that look good, and fit my build. I wish you luck on your future endeavors, and I highly recomend you restart your cafe with these principles in mind.
Please mark this with solution if it helped out!
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Hi @Caloxim! Love your build. I don’t have much to add (since everyone has said everything that I want to say). My one recommendation would be to adjust your sign, because I feel like it doesn’t really fit your build. On a side note, I honestly love that you put a Mettaton poster up (on that poster, the tape looks a little to fat, though).
Try less free models… That could help. I also think you should add in some more indoor tables.
Woah! It really did helped alot! Thank you so much! 
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Try adding some more indoor furniture and possibly a second story/balcony?
Overall, very nice and clean looking build. Good job.
Overall, It is a good build for a First Timer.
My suggestion are that,
Use less Free models in your builds.
Put more detail into your builds.
That’s all I have to say.
Looks good! Maybe try adding some tables on the inside. If you want to, you can add a little menu. Other than that, very promising!
Everything looks good i would like to say what you could add but everyone said everything you need
Good, but I see some free models in around, but you modificated it! I love your build.
Make it more detailed.