It looks amazing! However, as someone mentioned previously already, it looks very similar to a lot of other cafes out there. If you want to keep the low-poly / cartoony look it would be best to change the materials of some of the parts such as the dirt.
Do you take commissions by the way? I’d be very interested in hiring you.
Thanks for the suggestions! Can’t quite remember where the floor texture came from… It’s just been in my inventory for a while. Most likely found it from another builder.
Keep up the good work the cafe looks amazing.
Thanks for your feedback! I did mention I was trying to use common styles to get an idea of how to update my building style (as my last builds were in 2018 and styles were a bit different and less modern then), but I definitely get where you’re coming from. 
I do take commissions, however I’m a bit full at the moment. I may be available within a few weeks. You can always contact my discord, Poado#4275
Impressive! I love the modern theme, all those rectangle windows, this is one of my personal favorites. The color theme is very nice, and the font looks nice too. To be honest, there’s not much criticism I can make. Congrats on making such an awesome build! 