Please give feedback about this creation. What do you think about it?
*It contain some free models.
Game link : 여백 - Roblox
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Just from running around for about a minute, everything feels smooth and looks clean. It feels filled in and I think it looks nice. The only thing I’d change is the camera tilt when the camera moves. I’m not saying to remove it, but It can get weird when you barely move your camera, even decently slowly, and get a tilt that feels like you just moved the camera pretty fast. So maybe just tone that down a little. Other than that, it looks good. Nice job! 
(also, this is literally what free models are for, to help in the game dev process, just like an assets store)
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I’ll add some settings about camera. Thank you for your nice feedback! 
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This cyberpunk city design looks very good! Especially if it’s your first one! Nice job on it!
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제 체형에서는 걷기 애니메이션이 이상하게 보이기 때문에 이 경험은 훌륭해 보이지만 실제로는 별로 마음에 들지 않습니다. 또한 Roblox에 내장된 번역기를 사용하여 사람들이 자신의 언어로 볼 수 있도록 하는 것도 고려할 수 있습니다.
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Thank you for liking my work!
I will improve on that using the translation function. Thank you!
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To me, the bricks in your game look out of place. In the CyberPunk game, almost every single building is solely made from concrete, which is then topped off with other colorful materials like metal, neon signs, or just a ton of glass.
The difference in architecture when comparing the run-down to the rich of cyberpunk, they get more ‘glass-y’, colorful, and/or nature-integrated. The more of it a building has, the richer it is.
Examples:
In the game, there is a good indication of the street and the buildings it has to know in what class of area you are, however, in your picture I see buildings of every class on the same street.
I could be wrong, but I am just going off of your screenshots because at the moment I am unable to play the game myself. Don’t get me wrong, the buildings look good, it’s just that the bricks feel out of place.
Good luck creating it further, since I don’t doubt recreating a city like CyberPunk is not easy.
WOW! Great job on this build, may I ask what you want to do with it?
Thank you for your feedback and datas! It was very helpful for my build.
I need to more study and experience. your reply will make me more better.
This will add in to my portfolio!