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#1

Hello! Im new to devforum and i wanted to see the feedback on my recent gfx i made

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I accept suggestions and opinions :happy2:

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#2

In general, looks nice, you did great!

Here are some tips:

  1. Color balancing
    – Some of your colours are more vibrant, while some look more dull, the contrast between the front text and the background does not exactly reflect the contrast I’d expect, for example the black outline on the images are really dark compared to any other parts of the image. Also, the outlines are different sizes on each object. The text really has to pop out in the Icon, here the text can be slightly hard to see, but it’s not too bad. Overall you might wanna look at some other icons, specifically how they balance the colours on things that are more important.

  2. The “avatar looking into my soul” syndrome
    – I see this in a lot of GFX, if you want to step up your GFX game, make sure the person in the background is doing something related to what the game or group is about! For example, if it’s a cafe, they could be holding items such as coffee, wearing a work uniform, cooking, behind a counter or something reflecting more the vibe of a Cafe! Not only will it look more interesting, but it also tells to the player what the game or group is about, remember the icon is the first thing they see and it has to tell a story!

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#3

Thanks for the feedback, this was the first cafe gfx i did make. I will try later your tips :happy1:

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#4

This GFX looks good! Nice job on it!

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#5

First of all, I love the designs on the GFX and how you’ve tried to make it but there are some things that need a slight change.

Logo Text
I love the font that you’ve chosen on this and the colours but I think you should go with an outline that fits the gradient in the middle a bit better.

Food Icons
Try making the limit on the items to 2/3 as it’s more eye-catching and more groups use it.

Colours
Maybe next time when your trying to fade a colour from the text, make the opacity higher so you can’t see it as much but people can see that it’s there.

But overall you should still continue with designing GFXs as your amazing at them!

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#6

I will try in my next cafe gfx! Thanks for the feedback :happy3:

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#7

This is really good.

Like what @bewarethepaws said,

I think they’re right.

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like what I did here in my GFX for my Game “Seaside Cafe” in development
the character is doing their job showing its a Cafe/Work game.

Other than that the effects are AMAZING. I love the super customized logo.
it also shows a lot of Positive emotions which is KEY!

Keep up the great work!

~BeatBop

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