[FEEDBACK] My star wars game

Hello everyone.
I am making a star wars group and I want to make it great so I want to know how people like my game.

I like my game but here is a picture of the map.

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The terrain is quite basic, maybe with the path, make it more smoother. Buildings look quite good, also could we get a link to the game so we can see it from ground view?

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Yes Mos Eisley - Roblox

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First thing i see is bad sized GUI

, building are quite good, terrain is just basic and flat so you and overall the game is just boring, maybe if you add more things to do it will be better. Also are weapons free model or you made them?

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So first of all, I think from all the FMs you grabbed a virus as I just got TPed to another place. But to the map design, you need more variation. The buildings aren’t bad, but you just have a few copy and pasted houses which dont really look like Mos Eisley and a few Free Model assets. You should also work on the structure of the Map as it is quite basic right now. And why is the shop called “Jakku’s” while this is on tatooine?

Hi there! I appreciate your efforts to ensure you improve to the best of your extents. In addition to the other posts above, to improve on this place I’d suggest utilizing the terrain tool, especially with Painting, Growing & Eroding Terrain to give in that realistic effect to your players.

Good luck!

It is not a virus, the TP is of my game but that thing is not done yet.

You haven’t given us a lot of reference pictures, so it’s hard to see how it really looks like. But you have room for improvement:

  • The map is dull and empty. Which creates a boring vibe.

  • The GUI, as Unicorn said, looks cheap. You can literally see the pixels of the logo.

Other than that, I cannot really say anything else: a, you haven’t given us enough pictures; b, the map is empty and quite small.

Overall, not a terribly exciting build but if you improve a bit it will become better.

Buildings need more detail and the “Jakku’s” doesn’t really make sense since this is Tatooine. The terrain is kinda boring, some sand dunes wouldn’t hurt.