Feedback Needed, AGAIN, on Animation Test

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#1

Hello, fellow Feedbackers! Is that a word?

I’m back for more feedback on my animation, and don’t worry, I have improved a bit, I guess. Last time I forgot to edit Keyframes on my last post, this time I made it more good.

For those who don’t know whats going on, I’m looking for feedback on my animation made by Moon Animator, a plug in by xSIXx, which you can check out here.

Anyway, here it is:

Things I noticed:

  • Little sound effects, I get my FX from Zapsplat which didn’t work for me right now, so, I just used only a few.

Give feedback, don’t be shy, just remember to be helpful and expand why.

Thanks! :clapper:

Edit: Wow, you guys really like this, thanks for the feedback! I posted this on my youtube just to save it and share it, where you can see here.

Thank you all!

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#3

This animation looks decent! however, the thing that came flying out of no where and made that guy into a red brick shouldn’t be going in a perfectly straight line, but from besides that it looks pretty decent! 7/10.

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#4

Good, but the body of the dude who get hit should fall backwards, and not forwards.

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#5

Dang, I should think more about planing impact and stuff, thanks for the feedback!

#6

Ah, alright, I should adjust the speed a bit to make things more realistic, I planned to go super fast and into his face, thanks for the critique! :v:

#7

Loool! Really smooth and funny

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#8

Better than any animation I ever made that is for sure

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#9

I love it! The animation is great. And the comedy is a 10/10 :smile:

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#10

Agreed! I love the animation! :joy: