The first UI I made :
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Uhh… Maybe… improve it? If you want I can remake it and upload it here for you to download?
YES UMM UMMMMM ITS GOOD yes i like it.
It’s simple, which is expected for a first time UI designer that has just made their first UI. I would suggest to do more than add a Frame, TextLabel, and an ImageLabel though. Keep at the good work, everyone starts from the bottom just like you so you will get better as you practice. 
It’s hard to tell what’s going on by what seems to be a small cropped area of the screen, and no context of the game.
As others have said, it’s very simple. Which isn’t a bad thing, as a lot of people go over the top on adding treatments to their games here.
A good way to improve would be to try to copy the styles used in similar games you can find elsewhere. I’d especially pay attention to games outside of Roblox for this, as their creators are professionals.
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I don’t have any experience so I made simple text that appears once you click on a humanoid. That’s basically it, I only made this so I had at least a little experience for future projects.
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It’s too simple and, how some people would say, “unprofessional”. Basic font, gray transparency and a generic Roblox image gives us a basic feeling. Try playing more with gradients, choose different fonts, make borders, shadows and add some color. You can also mess with tweening when you achieve a better level with these UIs.
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I tried to keep a simple look while also making it way better.
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Woahhh that much cooler and better