I want to make sure I have these ads ready for when we start advertising and with not much to work on the game for now, I decided to work on the ads.
I would appreciate any feedback / criticism as i want to make these as best as possible.
Here they are:
Well, I think that there is something missing which is that you would require to fill some space including about what the game is about.As an advertisement, you are the one who is advertising about your product and needs to be specific and telling about what are those good quality about your product. The graphic design looks awesome but the thing missing is the âBannerâ which will attract people.Just remember to add some more info in it.
They look pretty good, I like them a lot. If youâre trying to stick to a theme, in both ads use the same exact font. If in a chance both the banner and the skyscraper are visible on a ROBLOX page, it would have the effect as like a game icon and a game thumbnail having different fonts. Itâs not that big of a deal but would make the ads stick to more of a theme.
Wording has a lot to do with ads, you need to get people interested. You need to persuade the user to play your game. If I was a user, I would look at the banner and say âUse Code Alpha for what?â. Iâd be more confused that intrigued. In the banner, you should rather say âPlay Nowâ instead of âPlay Todayâ, because if they are interested in the ad theyâll be more likely just click it later. âVersion Alphaâ also doesnât seem like the correct wording for what youâre trying to say to the audience.
Other than that, the GFX is nice and it has a great color/tone to it. Good luck!
There is lots of blank space on one side of the ad, mostly on the skyscraper ad, and a little bit on the banner ad. Also, maybe add what game your advertising so people know what theyâre clicking on, as of now, I couldnât tell you what type of game/group this advertisement is for, so I naturally wouldnât click on it. Also, itâs a little bit hard to depict whatâs going on in the pictures, especially on the banner ad. Some more touch-ups and they should be good for around .5CTR, which isnât the best, but theyâll suffice and attract some visitors.
The first one looks pretty good, make sure to use the same font. The âUse Code Alphaâ font, it looks very good. Thereâs also a lot of blank on the ads, make sure to add some detail. Add some more information on the adâs to really explain to people what the game is about, then youâll most likely get more clicks on the advertisements, other than that great job.
