This is my first ever blender GFX for my WIP game.
Any feedback on things I can improve?
it looks amazing bro good job but one thing I think could improve it is to add more stuff in the background cuz now it feels empty. or add some effects or you can add some taps floating around in the background.
I would say the LOGO Is Amazing, The GFX Is a Little Bit RUSTY. Aka Like The Dominus, Its Too Big, And The Electric Hands Look A Bit TOO Basic.
The man with the dominus is a bit too short from the camera’s perspective, and the guy on the right could be more animated. Try to exaggerate the pose a bit more. Make the message that you’re trying to convey to your audience more clear. For example, if the game that your making is competitive, pose the players in a way that makes them look fierce. Otherwise, it looks great for a first render. (Sorry for the bad grammar. English isn’t my primary language.)
The design looks natural, and simplistic. Try adding something interesting in the image such as more players enjoying the gameplay the design doesn’t really show much as it’s just too characters looking? Add more elements to make it stand out.
Since this is a thumbnail for your game, it does need those details to provide information about what your game is about just to give players, a view about your game something not too complicated to produce it should follow the gameplay and concept your going for. Brainstorm ideas and learn how to incorporate them in within your design:
At the start, it’s not giving information on what your game is about as it does lack ideas.
Definitely improved a little, nice work, keep up the good work.
yeah that one is much better, well done
Still a little plain in my opinion. It’s as if the background characters are just standing around, and not actually doing anything. I would say that you would need to fix the rendering quality, it isn’t the finest. You could also make the light levels lower, it’s a bit bright. Overall it looks pretty nice.
since its tapping warriors you could make it so the guy with the gold hat and the one with the gold dominus are jumping towards each other both holding the curser gold hat guy is holding
Considering it’s your first ever GFX, it looks good, and after I saw the updated version, it’s even better! Minor things are that the click icon is clipped inside the hand, and the characters are too spread apart in my opinion, maybe add more things for people to look at in the thumbnail, as that will make your game more exciting. Good logo placement, not much more here!
Love the work, keep it up!