Feedback Needed! Roblox Halloween Shirt!

Hello! Thanks for clicking on my post, i made this post because I’d like some feedback on a Roblox shirt I made, its a Halloween inspired shirt, and I need feedback if I should keep making clothing or not thank you!

Here, is the shirt if you need a better view, i put this at the bottom of the page, because im not looking to advertise this. – [LIMITED!]🎃Halloween🎃Evil Pumpkin👻Shirt🍬 - Roblox

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Hello! I am no merch designer, but the merch’s base is sourced from a “devil sided” merch , but ur creativity over using orange-black combo really gives the Halloween vibe and i hope that gets the no. of sales it deserves!
Best of Luck :slight_smile:

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i like it but Im not a fan of the random lines around it, maybe a vine (relating to the pumpkins) or arm bones wouldve been better then some boring lines

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Strongly agree upon, as line patterns are seen in many designs
A new innovative design would make it better

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noted thank you! for the advice, it was actually one of my first shirts, i just wanted to try something new

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I like it! But one thing:

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oops i think i did that on accident