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Hello, anything is there anything I can add to make it more realistic?

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Bump because no response :frowning: :frowning:

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Well three things you can do is
1- Lowering the roof a little bit, the character is almost a minion at this point and isn’t even the at the height where he can view the windows and the doors might need to be a bit bigger too
2- Creating a custom character for the game, it kind of ruins the experience in horror games (i’m assuming it is) when the player has a ton of accessories on him it reduces the horror factor by a good chunk
3- Playing with the materials a bit more, the garage specifically not only looks unrealisitc but has the color pallet and materials of puke

Also an optional advice is try to work a bit more on the hallway camera that the players need to go through to get to the garage it’s not the best

This is awesome!

A few suggestions…

  • Adding wood floor creaking sounds when walking.
  • Adding creaky door noises when opening a door.
  • Adding wall art. (Pictures, decor, statues, etc)

I actually think that the roof’s height is fine, if not raising it.

Nice work!
-BeatBop

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I see what you mean by how the character looks like a minion and i agree :laughing: Ive shrunken everything so its a bit smaller and have moved the roof down in the garage.

im not sure about adding customizable or just a custom character as the whole game is based around you so i guess ill add an accessory limit and add an accessory particle remover!

im trying to really limit all the materials to as basic as i can only because thats the style i like going for, however, i will be changing the colors so they are brighter/suitable.

Thank you!

I didnt think about adding creaky door noises! Thank you! as for the decor I’ll try to implement some more but i don’t want it to be detailed as it is only just a flashback, not a real part of the game.

Thanks again.

I would personally make the tweening of the camera from room-to-room a tad slower, as it seems a little too fast.

Meh, makes more sense if you actually play it real time.

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Heres an update for anyone curious!

Make the camera slowly follow the player, and only do a fast tween in new rooms.

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Sounds great!
If you ever need a 3d modeler, feel free to lmk!

(I do commissions on 3d modeling and gfx)

i would probably change the animations

I ended up scrapping this game because I didn’t like the direction it was going. Feel free to play the 1-minute ver of it here: 2D Demo - Roblox

Bye :derp: