[Feedback] New Game GFX

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Hello! I am fairly new to GFX and this is one of my first projects. These are meant for my game “Paper Lifting Simulator.” Any feedback would be great!

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Thank you so much for reading! :slightly_smiling_face:

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I’d suggest working on your lighting, it looks quite plain. Try adding some different colors and tones for a different feel.

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Thanks for the feedback! I will try that.

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No problem, it’s great to see new people trying out GFX. From experience it’s a very fun thing to get into to!

Hello again!

I really like these GFXs as they suit the games style really well, one thing that I have to mention that @SBTechh already did is your lighting. It does look quite plain, maybe try making some different tones of lighting. Also try to make some night time GFXs to suit the day and night cycle in the game.

Good luck on future designing.

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Thank you so much for the feedback! I will keep that in mind!

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Make it more realistic, if its not in cycles render, then I suggest changing it. I really like the last render!

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Thanks for the feedback!

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Let me know if you need any help with the game! :stuck_out_tongue: I can do pretty much anything.

Actually I would love some help with some small things! I have DMed you. :slightly_smiling_face:

The Renders look great and have a nice simplistic design, however in my opinion if you added more to the background like the two fighting and chickens, perhaps some something to add more to the simplistic design, and as I saw someone else mentioned lighting above which could also help in giving off more vibes off the GFX .
Overall though, they are great and I love the low poly simplistic design you have gone with it.

Goodluck with your game!

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It’s pretty good, also you should try bending limbs with a rig instead of the Roblox model itself. Along with, I suggest using HDRI lighting for scenes, looks spectacular.

Ok, thanks! And I did use an HDRI.

Looks a bit plain and the lighting could be improved, but overall good job on the GFXs

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Thanks! Do you know where I can get a cartoon sky that is also an HDRI?