Feedback of my build in Roblox Studio

Good morning everybody.

Today Iā€™m bringing my second build into Roblox Studio.

If you can say what I should improve and which others I could do, I would be very happy. (^^)

Those are with effect, follow ones with no effect now.

Suggestions of other builds for me to build and how to improve them are always welcome.

Thanks for reading. :slightly_smiling_face:


Iā€™m out of ideas of what to build, so I want your suggestions to help me.

Thanks for reading.