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#1

Disclaimer: Please note this is the first version of this. There will be more.

Hello!

I am currently working on a game and I would like some feedback on my startup screen.

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#2

I think the font might need to be changed, and the “Five Nights At” could maybe faze in and out, as the writing fades away, but idk if that’s possible for guis. It’s a working start though.

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#3

Looks cool! But as mentioned above, the font can be changed and the “Five nights at” could faze in an out.

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#4

Thanks for the feedback!

I will change the font as it is Motoko Glitch.

I had a problem while uploading the image.

I will probably add something under the title like: Demo, night 1 etc.

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#5

3 Words, Fix The Lighting, Great work though!

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#6

The backstory of the font is I used an app on my iPad, but I can’t have a transparent background, so I sent it to my pc and used gimp to do so, however I did a bad job. Again I am trying to upload an image but it gives me errors.

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#7

The font is kind of weird plus the layout out of the text is odd, and it’s kind of boring to play if you’re just sitting there. Maybe add a sound effects or some more ambience to get the mood going? Oh yeah, depending on your target audience, there might be some slow readers and people who can’t keep up with the text you’re putting at them.
++ credits might be good if you want to bump your self up

If you’re only asking for opinions on your start screen, then so far I think it looks great! Can you please notify me when you’re finished so I can play it?

Keep on developing!
Love your work.

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#8

One time I will make the game public for a limited time for testing purposes. I’ll make a post on the forum when I will make it public.

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#9

Also for the short time, usually it’s at least 10 seconds for it to start disappearing. I made the video short so i can upload it here.

#10

Im thinking that the lighting could be a lot darker since its at 12AM which is dark. Also add some textures to it for it to be more intresting. overall, Nice job.

#11

Thanks for the feedback, just to let you know everything is not finished. But I think adding textures would be SUPER good for me.

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#12

Here’s an updated version:

and again

It is still not finished.

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#13

It looks good so far! Good job!

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#14

Hi everyone! I recently made a post in which the game is now public, I changed the intro by adding a dark background.

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