How do i improve this?
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This is absolutely amazing. The animations are fluid and the visuals are clean!
It’s not too bad for a first. I think you should add some camera shake, neon spikes, and having the spikes move back into the ground one after another.
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thank you
anyways i can improve this?
edit:ok thanks 
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Use glass for the material, add camera shake as @Crazedbrick1 suggested, make the ice spikes a bit more transparent and maybe add a few particles that shows that its breaking through the floor. And maybe a few blue particles to the summoner’s hand, preferably client sided so its less lag for other players.
And just for good measure make sure it doesn’t act weird with walls infront or near of the player which summons the ice.
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i added the camerashake what now?
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Wow this looks good! Perhaps making it a tad faster would improve it but that’s just my opinion.
You should like make the ice neon
put some screen shaking when you use the skill
and like a melting ice below
would like bettet
It’s pretty good but i recommend making the player’s animation a bit longer, and more, how do i say this, dramatic I guess? Also (not that this is a problem, just something to note) it’s a bit generic.
im bad at animating ;(
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Add variation to the kinds of ice spikes you’re using and also add some VFX such as shaking and particles.
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what type of particles?
Maybe like snow particles falling from the spikes as they come up and also add some neon bits to it so it has some more life to it.
Hello there,
It looks great for the first time. I saw even the other videos what u changed on it.
Maybe u can make the animation faster? It’s kinda slow for a effect like this I think. U can just try it.
Kind regards,
DutchBuilds.
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the material doesn’t look like ice… the ground should become wet and start rumbling, the player should have an animation like he lifts his hand up and kinda struggles
you can take inspiration from deepwoken
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