Feedback on 2 player obby lobby

[ghgfdhmkug2 (ghg)]

Hello! I am makin a roblox 2 player obby game and i need feedback about what to change in the lobby. i have several photos down below:

Thank you!

[ChiIlDev (ChillDev)]

Looks good! Maybe make the bridge (I think that’s what that is) a little more detailed

[ghgfdhmkug2 (ghg)]

you mean this bridge?

[ghgfdhmkug2 (ghg)]

I also feel like this part is a bit messy

[BeansIsPro (ras)]

Looks great, although this border could be better by making it look more like the spawn island.

what I’d say need changing:

what it should look more like:

[ghgfdhmkug2 (ghg)]

anything else? or is it good? i feel like the main area is messy

[ghgfdhmkug2 (ghg)]

i decided to redo all the vegetation and decoration. ill give an update when finished

[BeansIsPro (ras)]

1: I suggest removing the mushrooms, replacing them with flowers, such as the blue one.

2: random crates?? they just seem a bit out of place.

3: benches also seem a bit out of place.

4: bridge looks skinny and the support pillars are just funny looking.

[ghgfdhmkug2 (ghg)]

im placing trees in a more organised position and giving them random scale to make it look more uniform. Ill add your suggestions and other stuff. Thank you for the feedback tho!

[ghgfdhmkug2 (ghg)]

I decided to keep the mushrooms, as it gives a little color variety. I organized a lot of the trees

[ChiIlDev (ChillDev)]

Yes, maybe change the posts and add rails to the bridge

[ghgfdhmkug2 (ghg)]

yeah i will soon. Thank you!

CHARRSSSSS

[ghgfdhmkug2 (ghg)]

put together something i really like!

[Krant19worlddv (Krant_dv)]

it looks so good ! maybe add signs to it to guide the players

[ghgfdhmkug2 (ghg)]

Will do! Thank you for the feedback!

[agentphilip07 (Philip)]

This obby lobby looks great! I like the theme/style/colors of it! Great job on it! How long did it take for you to make this lobby?

[ghgfdhmkug2 (ghg)]

about 6 and a half hours. it took me way too long.