Lately I’ve been working on this piece, and I’m quite proud of it!
Artists, feel free to critique this to your hearts’ content, all feedback is highly appreciated!!
Also, this is Kyoko Kirigiri from Danganronpa, for those who don’t know >:)
(Mine)
(Original)
looks pretty good im not a artist but maybe improve the face a bit and the art will look very clean
What do you mean by changing the face?
this artwork is rlly nice, but i agree with chris about the face. idk if you sketched this out or not, but the hair seems to be resting really close to the forehead (while as in the original theres still some space inbetween.
the head also looks a bit wonky and a bit disproportionate. if you ever tried imagining your characters bald (weird but helpful), it might help with drawing out the hair so it doesnt sit too close to the skull :b
i also think you can improve on the bangs a bit aswell and give it more detail
(i recommend watching telepurte’s guide on drawing hair for better understanding 
i hope this helps =)
that’s really helpful, thank you!!
btw is this girl you are trying to redraw from dangonronpa?
yes it is, i mentioned it in the post lol
