Feedback on 3D animation?

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#1

Hi there!
I recently made my best 3D animation on blender so far and got positive opinions about it from the most negative people aswell.
However , i still feel it misses out on a lot of things so i wanted to get your feedback on it!
I will make a proper animated roblox movie from it if it gets positive feedback or a lot of views that would make it worth making a full series/movie of.
The animation:

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#2

Looks neat! Easy to tell what genre this would probably be if it were a movie.

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#3

This animation looks good, nice job on it!

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#4

try to learn the 12 principles of animation

many people who can hate for using the gfx rig and not using a normal r6 rig for that use an r15 rig within blender, there are free r15 and r6 rigs everywhere