Feedback On 3rd Sword Creation

StellarDev · January 3, 2021, 8:07pm

Hello Everyone. I as some may know am new to making weaponry and this is my 3rd sword.

Feedback is welcome and much needed.

Aerophagia · January 3, 2021, 8:12pm

The blade itself is too wide compared to the cross-guard. And if its a greatsword then put a comparison (a test dummy is what i mean by comparison) next to the sword so we can actually see how big it is

StellarDev · January 3, 2021, 8:13pm

It is based off of a one handed Greek Sword. And Thank you for the Feedback.

antojensob · January 3, 2021, 8:38pm

Your sword looks well made! But the blade of the sword looks wonky to me. I don’t know why it looks weird to me, but it does. Probably because of the shape of the blade going inward? But, this sword still looks pretty good! I would just try to improve from that!

JollyGameCrazy · January 3, 2021, 9:11pm

Very primitive, there isn’t any style to it.

StellarDev · January 3, 2021, 9:36pm

It is based off of old Greek swords that were made that way to have a heavy end for extra swing power. Thanks for the feedback.

StellarDev · January 3, 2021, 9:37pm

I am aware that it’s primitive. This is my 3 sword although thanks for the feedback.

StellarDev · January 4, 2021, 12:36pm

this is the new version I just slightly narrowed the blade. Let me know if its still to wide.

CharlieValognas · January 4, 2021, 1:08pm

You could make the cross guard wider, I think it needs to be widened personally.

StellarDev · January 4, 2021, 2:30pm

Thank you for your feedback. As I have said in previous replies. This sword is based off of a Greek sword and that served its purpose of attaching the blade to the handle.

CharlieValognas · January 4, 2021, 3:00pm

Could you send a picture of the image you based it of then?

StellarDev · January 4, 2021, 4:57pm

I would rather stick to what I created in Roblox to post on the forum not other pictures.

CharlieValognas · January 4, 2021, 5:11pm

That doesn’t make sense, why would you not post other photos? I would like to see the picture so I can tell you how closely it resembles it, if my suggestion of making the cross guard is not something you can do because you are basing it of a Greek sword, then I would like an image to see what you could do to make it resemble a Greek sword even more.

StellarDev · January 4, 2021, 5:19pm

I based the handle partly off of this but not the top of it and the blade I can’t find the reference. images (3)

CharlieValognas · January 4, 2021, 5:20pm

Ok that is fine. but by the looks of it I would still recommend extending the cross guard out, even a little bit

Luxorz · January 4, 2021, 5:30pm

Blade is thick and the handle is a bit small in proportion. I can see you used roblox materials to texture it, but personally I’d just texture it in blender. good job

StellarDev · January 4, 2021, 5:32pm

I like texturing in Roblox that way it can easily be recoloured or retextured, and I also believe it just matches better that way.