Feedback on a Barn I Made

I would like to see how I could improve this really cool Barn I made:
Hope I can find ways to improve it :smiley:

Barn

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The barn seems too tall compared to the width. Maybe decrease the hight a bit.

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Maybe give the door color behind the white parts,so it doesen’t just look like a wall.

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It looks very neat :slight_smile: I think the style you’re going for is a simplistic plastic, but if its not I think it would look really nice with more texture.

Also, I feel that the roof of the barn needs to have more colors. Either stripes like if it was a sort of sheet metal roof, or sort of structure under it like wooden bars as some buildings have. :+1:

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Thanks ill try my best to make it less tall!

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Thanks for the feedback!
Ill try editing the roof a bit more detail!

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Thanks for the feedback!
Ill modify the door a bit to try and make it feel less flat!

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Just used all of the replies so far and upgraded it!
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This looks a lot better! Good work!

It just looks unfinished, several inverted faces and a untextured roof and assuming the barn is 50 feet tall the doors are a massive 20 feet tall! To add on there seems no logical reason to have that opening at the top. I know you are trying to go for low poly but there is a difference from no effort and decimating mathmatically

The hay out of the barn looks like it’s about to fall out. Maybe make it smaller?

The barn is actually supposed to be small holding about 3 animals, The roof is now textured and I really like the top opening as thats what I see as cartoonish Barns…

Oh whoops didn’t notice the hay to big!

Btw we call what you built is called barn not farm :smile:

Oh whoops :laughing:!
Didn’t notice I put farm!

Oh that looks better. Great work!

A little thin, thb. The hay is also kinda weird, considering how it sticks out from the wall at the edges.

Increasing width and reducing height a little bit would make it perfect! Well done