Feedback on a bus I built

I built a bus which is based off of the Hyundai Universe, I wasn’t trying to make it realistic.

I’d like some feedback on it and what I can do to make it look a bit less blocky, here it is:


(still trying to add a bit more detail)

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Hey,

The bus is great you have there! Try adding more details to the back, like make some stuff as it’s shown in the image below
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Which is the yield sign-
the number of the bus and the AC/Heater that’s on there.

For the front:
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You should consider adding the bus location like where it’s going or just a sign that says anything!
Something like:
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To make it less blocky, try to do the same thing how you did in the front top.

You did an amazing job there, but try searching up real-life bus examples as well, so you can get more great examples I’m sure you’ll find a lot of ideas to add then.

Keep up the great work.

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Hello!

This looks marvelous! As stated in the post above, possibly add more details in the back, as well as a possible sign on the front. Overall, this is a marvelous build. I look forward to seeing the end result!

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this is amazing, i cannot build something so good. To me it looks like a futuristic bus because of the colors and shape of the bus

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It looks ok. It’s just a little too blocky (but that doesn’t matter).

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Thank you so much for the feedback! I was also planning on adding more detail to the back of the bus but never really got around to it.

Thanks, I guess it did become something like that but I didn’t intend on it lol.

In studio? nice. except back of bus is liek empty broskiScreen Shot 2021-04-09 at 9.07.27 AM
and there no driver wheel
or radiator or headlights

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Yeah, I didn’t really add them but I’ll get around to add the driver wheel and the headlights!

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