Hello I’m Xezum I was looking to see if you fellow Roblox devs, and members could give me some feedback on how my cafe looks, how I can make it look better, and some suggestions on changes and stuff I should add. Please look below for photos or the game link.
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Thank you for taking the time and looking at my build please leave feedback below!
Also, I might sell this build in the future because I’ve built it and I don’t know why.
Thank you for the feedback I have set some Items in the game to reflect to give the chrome effect like the metal supports, and air vents but there not too noticeable in the photos.
This, is a very impressive build! The only thing lacking i see is there’s a bit too many spaces that’s empty, might care if you wanna fill these spaces with a decoration or maybe just a simple rug. Additional wall decorations also won’t hurt (like posters, etc), so it’ll look more natural.
Thank you, and yes I did it took a little while to build because some of my unions I made for the fireplace and vents kept disappearing when I saved my game.
Your Cafe is pretty nice but the music is a poor choice and doesn’t fit the theme of your build, the trees are lacking on creativity using just cubes. The water terrain material needs to be smoothen because it’s very buggy. And the glass or invisible wall is not needed or can’t be seen clearly., have a good day!
The doors at the entrance are a little difficult to walk in easily first try. It takes a bit of thinking to see where you’re supposed to enter. I suggest putting them more towards the corner or center.
There’s also some light positioning inconsistencies for the trees at the spawn.
There’s also some changes needing to be done to the light poles. Some are floating while others are not.
This looks super nice! But since you’re already using the water terrain you should use the grass terrain and use the decoration option to make it even more nice.
This is an amazing build. This has a lot of good details. However, there are a few things that could be improved on:
The streets are quite empty, you could build a few cars and place them on the roadside.
You could add a couple of NPC’s walking around and sitting on the chairs and serving people at the counter and at the tables to really show that the cafe is lively.
I’m not too sure about this one. The music may be copyrighted and you may want to change that. You can use Roblox’s audio library if you want.
(This is optional only if you want to have a gamepass.) You could have a gamepass where people can work at the cafe.
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