If you want to play this ingame: Miserable cavern - Roblox
Part count ~6500, took 9 hours to build
Please give me feedback on
- how this build can be improved
- any decoration ideas
- Name suggestions for this build
- Lighting
Thanks for reading!
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WOW 9 Hours
It looks perfect
Why are there orange lights
I would give a 10/10
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The orange lights are supposed to be the windows, if you have an idea on how to change the windows please reply or pm I think it looks weird too
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Are the windows just orange? Or the lights inside are orange
DUDE. THIS IS SO GOOD. It looks so amazing! The orange fits so well with it. I would just keep it as is or even add some lava!! But honestly, this is perfection.
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The windows are orange neon. They don’t have any lights
Yeah, I would keep it, but the swamp wont go with it, so that is why it looks out of place for me
Yeah I do see that now. Maybe the windows could be a neon dark green or something like that?
I guess you could change them to another color, like yellow, or maybe no color at all
It could be no color or something like a yellow, I am trying to visualize it,
For one thing, I changed the window color to green . It doesn’t really fit and yellow def wouldn’t work. And I changed the ground to a lava color.
- Green window, green ground
- Orange window, lava ground
- keep original don’t change anything
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Since the cavern has a lot of water on the bottom, I’d suggest having water flow down from the top and side.
The Eerie Grotto
I’d suggest making it a lot darker and having the windows provide light.
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I really like the green now! Awesome!! Great job.
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its nice except the auburn floor has nothing on it or too it. everything else looks a little weird, especially the windows, and there isn’t enough detail on this
(but seeing how this took 9 hours idk if you should work more on this) cus it looks really empty in some places, and the textures don’t look good from closeup since they arent 3d like everything else
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Whats this cavern build for. Just curious.
it looks amazing but if your pc can handle it add some more lighting? and maybe have some color variations in the window color, so like dark orange, light orange, yellow, you get the point.
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These were the original pictures of the build before I changed the exposure compensation to 0.7 and the ambient lighter
Imo it looked to dark and the orange windows stood out too much, and my PC can handle most lighting at level 21 rendering
- Darker Lighting
- Keep original
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Added 3 small “waterfalls” If that’s what you mean
Changed the name : )
Just made it for fun, found a cool fantasy art on Pinterest and tried to make something like it
What kind of decoration could I add around the build? And for the texture of the walls do you think it would look better if i replaced it w/ grass or sand?
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Fantastic work!
I will give a 10/10
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Sound is a great way to improve the ambience of a place, both music and sfx.
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My first impression on it is that its awesome! you did this in 9 hours… how. I think I’m just a perfectionist because this would take me much longer.
I don’t like that window color a whole lot though its too orange, I would make the color look more like indoor lighting or fire so like a yellow, just try it I guess. And yeah the initial pics are a bit bright, just make it slightly darker but so that details can still be seen. Overall, it’s very impressive. I bet people would pay you to make maps for their games
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