Feedback on a FPS map

Hello!
I’m Timber_Ridge and Ive sent the past few days working on a map that I’ll soon be submitting to a game group. Id like some feed back, even the smallest detail, so It looks great when I present it.

Thanks!

Screen Shots

The Game

Arsenal Map - Roblox

All helps!

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There doesn’t seem to be anything in the game you linked. (Forgot to upload it to roblox?)

I haven’t played much arsenal, but I do know it’s a FPS game like the others. I’m afraid this is far too small to be put into a game like arsenal, even for a small map like shipment on COD


There’s no cover beside around back and inside. and the level of detail compared to arsenal maps (from what ive seen) is decreased.

If this was not ment for arsenal (Like your game said) then I suppose it could work as some small fps game with 3-4 people on each team.

Try adding more cover outside and overall just expanding the map a bit more. insides could also use some work.

Great job! I just feel like it is quite empty. Being an arsenal player myself, I don’t feel like it has enough detail to go into arsenal. Feedback aside, when I enter the game, there is just an empty baseplate.

Here is what I mean by detail:


In your map, the shipping containers are made of just a couple of parts or two. Where in arsenal’s map aircraft, there are places to go, hide, and fight. Overall it just needs some work.
Adding on from what @Ser4x said about the map size, most maps are big enough to where they are not too big, but not too small. Your map seems kind of small if it were to be in the game.
Overall, it does not feel like an arsenal map yet.

Thanks for the feed back. I felt like the whole time I was making it that it would be too small. Turns out im right. Ill go in and be sure to give the containers more detail and such.

I also went and fixed the base plate problem.

Thanks for the feedback!

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Overall, it looks pretty nice. I do think the shipping containers could use a bit more detail though.

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It’s not a map that would bring much excitement to me when I see it. I mean, it’s better then anything I could do, but I just feel there needs to be a little more detail and cover ground.

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Thanks for the feedback!

I do see how it is a bland map. Ive decided to redo the floor plan and give everything the detail it needs.

Updates

As you can see the floor plan has changed. Ive also added depth to the containers and such. Im hoping this will bring it to life.

Thanks!

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