Feedback on a game advertisement

I created this ad for a Roblox Arcade game I created and I need feedback on it? Is it good and do you think it will attract players?

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You’re on the right track. You have the right content to show, screenshots that explain the game in a few seconds. However, it doesn’t catch my eye, so you’re gonna need to add some style on it.

Try using more vibrant colors. Put the screenshots above and have a separate little area just for the text. Make it something that users just scrolling by will stop and take a loom at your advertisement.

@GalaxyGourmet I agree. Even though the advert is good, it needs to be decorative with more vibrant colours. + Have more gfx than gameplay in the ad. The gameplay just makes it looks scummy.

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Thanks for the feedback. Here are the ideas I have for improving it:
1: Add an outline to the text
2: Make the font more interesting
3: Move the text to the top or bottom
4: Replace the game screenshots with renders
5: Make it more colorful and eye-catching

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My friend helped me create a new version.

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YES. Thats wayy wayy better. Looks pretty cool

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