I created this ad for a Roblox Arcade game I created and I need feedback on it? Is it good and do you think it will attract players?
You’re on the right track. You have the right content to show, screenshots that explain the game in a few seconds. However, it doesn’t catch my eye, so you’re gonna need to add some style on it.
Try using more vibrant colors. Put the screenshots above and have a separate little area just for the text. Make it something that users just scrolling by will stop and take a loom at your advertisement.
@GalaxyGourmet I agree. Even though the advert is good, it needs to be decorative with more vibrant colours. + Have more gfx than gameplay in the ad. The gameplay just makes it looks scummy.
Thanks for the feedback. Here are the ideas I have for improving it:
1: Add an outline to the text
2: Make the font more interesting
3: Move the text to the top or bottom
4: Replace the game screenshots with renders
5: Make it more colorful and eye-catching
YES. Thats wayy wayy better. Looks pretty cool