Hello everybody I need feedback on a new game called “Dwiddle” – All thanks go to IProgramForFun.
So I have been wondering if
is good enough, or you guys like it 
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If yes great! if no please send feedback below why, Thanks 
and stay safe during these times 
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It’s very cute but I feel like it could be improved.
There seems to be a lot of empty space above the text which is just filled with clouds.
Here are my solutions:
You could either move the character above the Dwiddle text so it on top of the W where it can reach the D with its pick axe (I didn’t notice the D was cracked bc I was just staring at the face of the character).
OR
Make the D falling down a bit since it’s cracked and the text tilting so the character can better reach the D with its pick axe.
At this point I don’t know if I’m making any since. Have fun deciphering! 
Anyways, it’s a good icon it just needs more to it. You’re doing great!
Here, this will illustrate it better:
See how the character is above the text in the once empty space? See how he’s titled towards the cracked D with his pick axe?
Here is another idea I had:
I moved the text up and made the pick axe touch the crack in the D. I also added grass.
I don’t know if you like these ideas. It’s your icon after all. You’re doing great 
It’s good, but I don’t know if people would click it.
It looks a bit unroblox like and too simple.
I don’t down right dislike it, which is why I picked “Yes I like it!”, but I think it needs improvement so my actual is answer is “It’s okay.”
What I think could use improvement is just it needs more to it. Like others have said the huge amount of empty space above is a waste. I would either center the entire thing or do something like @ LandofLee1620 has done.
I also think that the image doesn’t give me an exact idea of what it is about. Like I have a feeling it is mining and maybe this cute cartoony thing? I think the entire thing needs more character and shows exactly what the game is all about.
Hope this helps!
well that is what the characters look like in the final game.
Here is what the game is like so far
All you did is remove the pickaxe? I don’t think this a great change. Now you have no idea what the game could be about from the picture and the amount of empty space at the top is still there. It also doesn’t really peak my interest as it looks too simple.
This game has a ton of speed run potential for nintendo fans. You should make this obby related. (in my opinion)
nah this game is based on survival
I do like it but I selected that I don’t because there’s a lot to improve. Here’s a list I created of improvements:
Other than that, great work!
It is pretty empty you should add more like a plane
I’d say this one you made is better.
Thanks, but I was just trying to illustrate a point.
@BottomLess_VORTEX you are welcome to use the icons I made if you want them.
i ite close this tho this is kinda 
what about this?
Maybe try a 3d logo i think 2d is a little old and retro. I think it looks good but
I don’t think it would be an effective thumbnail.
ill stick with GFX and renders then cya
