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#4

It’s good, but I don’t know if people would click it.

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#5

It looks a bit unroblox like and too simple.

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#6

I don’t down right dislike it, which is why I picked “Yes I like it!”, but I think it needs improvement so my actual is answer is “It’s okay.”

What I think could use improvement is just it needs more to it. Like others have said the huge amount of empty space above is a waste. I would either center the entire thing or do something like @ LandofLee1620 has done.

I also think that the image doesn’t give me an exact idea of what it is about. Like I have a feeling it is mining and maybe this cute cartoony thing? I think the entire thing needs more character and shows exactly what the game is all about.

Hope this helps!

#7

dwiddle3
dwiddle3600×600 28.3 KB

what do you think about this?

#8

well that is what the characters look like in the final game.

#9

Here is what the game is like so far

#10

All you did is remove the pickaxe? I don’t think this a great change. Now you have no idea what the game could be about from the picture and the amount of empty space at the top is still there. It also doesn’t really peak my interest as it looks too simple.

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#11

This game has a ton of speed run potential for nintendo fans. You should make this obby related. (in my opinion)

#12

nah this game is based on survival

#13

I do like it but I selected that I don’t because there’s a lot to improve. Here’s a list I created of improvements:

  • Make a more in-depth skybox. Sunrays, sunlight effect, etc.
  • Change the black border size on the Dwiddle.
  • Change the absolute color of the crack on the ‘D’ in the title. So far it’s a mixture of white and black, most likely just from low quality. Changing it to be completely black would make it look cleaner.
  • The after drop affect on the title is nice. Maybe make it 50% transparent and blurred?
  • The game icon isn’t showing the game. My instant impression is that it’s a little cube on a mining adventure. Maybe this is your game but I thought it was more than that.

Other than that, great work!

#14

It is pretty empty you should add more like a plane

#15

I’d say this one you made is better.

#16

Thanks, but I was just trying to illustrate a point.

@BottomLess_VORTEX you are welcome to use the icons I made if you want them.

#17

i ite close this tho this is kinda :frowning:

#18

How
what about this?

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#19

Maybe try a 3d logo i think 2d is a little old and retro. I think it looks good :+1: but
I don’t think it would be an effective thumbnail.

#20

ill stick with GFX and renders then cya

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#21

It looks decent but, if I were you, I would change the name (the top meaning on Urban Dictionary). I wouldn’t want to take any chances with a name like that.

(edit): I don’t know if this would be a problem since it’s not the official definition.

#22

Dwiddle means write randomly with a pen or somtin

#23

This is cute! This is much better than the first!
I love it :hearts:

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