Feedback on a GFX I made for my little sister


I made this for my little sister, icelollymunchkin.
Let me know what you think!

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Oh also the shirt was designed by me.

Her legs are bent weird and the lighting looks strange. I suggest changing the lighting to white. Other than those things, it looks nice!

The pose is pretty odd, and I think this would look better if the background was fully the pink/purple design. Also, the text font could be better.

Welcome back to how long can epileptic people look at peoples GFX!

seriously, I agree with sneaker.
6/10 sorry to be harsh.

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It’s not harsh all of you, it’s called constructive criticism.
I agree that the lights look odd. and I also agree that the pose looks odd.
See, my device doesn’t run Blender amazingly, so I try to get the rigging and rendering done as fast as possible.

Oh and as for the font I had no internet when I did it so i just grabbed a font that I had downloaded.

Pretty poor lighting, the pose is pretty wierd, the background is really random, and the font isn’t very nice.

5/10 if I’m being brutally honestly

Can you be a bit more. You know specific?
I don’t know what makes lighting poor and I also don’t know what counts as weird in your opinion. What makes something random Abstract? And what is it you don’t like about the font I used?

Also does anyone have any feedback on the shirt? It’s my first one.

Maybe change the text front looks blah for me

The colour of the background doesn’t mix well with the lighting and it’s also not consistent enough. You can’t see it on all parts of the body and it doesn’t effect each place equally. To sum up it looks like its coming from random places.

The posing is awkward and just un - humanlike.

The background just looks (no offense intended) quite messy and as if someone went into liquify and did random strokes.

The font is… idk what to say just not nice imo. It reminds me of the text from on old 2000s games

Also I think the shirt looks really good, you did really well on that :+1:

Thank you for being more specific, now I know what to do next time.

I would honestly change the background imo as it doesn’t match the lighting that well. The font could also have a change as it looks a bit boring.


Why are her legs so shiny yet her arms aren’t?
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