Greetings!
I built a homestore with two of my friends who are designers, so I would like some feedback on how we did. I decided to dress the mannequins according to the clothes my avatar is wearing because why not hahaha. Kindly also recommend other kinds of build that could match this style, otherwise a feedback is fine! For those interested, this homestore can be stocked with 160-200 clothes (or more if we add another floor)!
To be honest I don’t think you have to change anything on it because it’s actually nice style and modern with fancy decorations that’s why I liked it.
But there’s something kinda funny, when I saw the sign it included all the languages, I noticed Arabic language but it is broken it should be “أهلاً وسهلاً”
but it’s like peices
And honestly I’m glad to see people now interested in Arabic language and support it.
If you need help with this I could try.
I hope you benefit from my feedback, keep up!
Hey there,
I think your build is pretty good, but I noticed a majority of things. I think you know this, but your store is selling the same exact clothing. I think the outside of the area needs more than trees.
Examples
I also noticed that you put neon on the front of your homestore, but I see no neon whatsoever on the back. I think you should put neon on the sides and on the back rather than just leave it plain. 
Okay, thank you for your feedback! Pertaining the translation, since it’s a decal that I uploaded, I’ll just top it with your translation with a GUI. Thank you for letting me know!
Hahaha, for the clothes, yes I am aware it’s the same clothes! My helpers didn’t have time to put the clothes yet, so we just copy-pasted all the clothes. This homestore is for a particular group actually, so it’s not really our store. Also, if you do not mind, based on your judgement, if I take into account your feedback, like if we add more outdoor decor, do you know how much we could sell this for (for the person who requested it). Anyway, I’ll make sure to add more outdoor decor and neon all around! Thank you for the constructive feedback!
Nice building so far, especially I like the idea that the home store has its own theme for specific clothes.
Very eye-catching! I’d say some of the best ways to improve builds in a more general way is having small details that would really just make everything pop out. Your home store is well built and the floor’s texture is great. I think there’s more things you could include in the home store, maybe place some interior decoration like shelves, clothing stands, circular tables, ect. Try adding more vegetation throughout the area I feel like the exterior is something that should have more work done.
I feel like the ceiling there could be more things that could be added to make it not look plain, maybe add more ceiling lights or air vents just to add a nice touch to it in general. Overall the store exterior lacks detail for the interior I would try making different shapes and sizes of clothing, equipment so it won’t look repetitive, maybe add cloths lay upon tables other than that it’s pretty neat.
No problem, but if you gonna use Gui, you should know Roblox studio haven’t support languages Right to left yet I’m not sure if they fixed that but if they didn’t you will get it like “وسهلاً اهلاً”
So fix it to be like
“أهلاً وسهلاً”
Good luck!
Honestly I’m not fan of who make decors outdoor because it’s scarcely when the player look on it also it is a homestore not a full game that make anyone go everywhere of it so just focus inside of it at least on everything that anyone could see it at first because it’s the reason to make anyone be excited to see what’s inside it and see how it looks like
And if you gonna change you may change the type of rocks like use modern ones and that’s better
I hope that you agree that point
Thank you for your constructive feedback! It will really help us out, not only this time, but in our future builds as well. I will make sure to add more details (the ones you’ve mentioned) with the help of my designers, and we’ll see how that’ll go from there! Again, thanks a lot!
Correct! Though we will strive to add a few more details, just not as much as others would expect if it were a game (because it’s not) since this is what the other members here have pointed out. I’ll make sure to focus on the interior more than the exterior (again, just adding a few more details in the exterior area). As for the rocks, do you mean the ones surrounding the homestore? I did them really quick, so it doesn’t look very modern hahaha, but I’ll see if I can make meshes instead to make it look more modern! Also, for the translation, if that’s the case, I guess I’ll just re-upload the decal with your translation, I think that’s our best bet! Thanks!
Glad that you agreed my point, I understand that and you can use low-poly rocks it will do well or realistic ones if that what you’re looking for.
And yeah this could be solution to fix that!
Wow, thank you very much! I really appreciate it!
You’re welcome!
I hope I have helped you as much as possible (:
I’ll even add credits for your translation, without it, the people visiting would’ve felt uncomfortable hahaha
Thank you, I actually appreciate that!
No worries! Last thing, I just want to make sure Google Translate isn’t lying… Is this thank you: شكرا جزيلا ?
Hahhaha right it is, don’t worry 
Also,العفو
Okay, perfect, thanks hahaha
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