Hello! I have made a low-poly showcase game and I’d like your feedback on it, is there anything I can improve? or is there something I need to add?
Feel free to hit me with feedback or criticism as that would be greatly appreciated!
Note:
@Darvean helped with building and modeling.
Game:
Here are the photos:
Looks good mate, I like the smooth edges on the buildings! The lighting as well is realistic.
I explored the game a bit. I am no builder but I did enjoy the showcase!
Perhaps the Deli could use a window as well? I recall it being the only building without a window. (except the garage)
In rest the showcase is awesome, great lightning!
Keep up the good work 
Thanks! I’ll be sure to add some windows to the Deli 
I love the run-down feel of the game, with the modern “vibe” of the smooth edges.The paths are very detailed, and the puddles add to the grey atmosphere.
To improve, you could maybe add slightly more detail to the building itself. Perhaps trying broken bricks, cracks, etc. Just to give the buildings more wear and tear.
This is a very very small point, but try to use different fonts on the signs. They are all very similar if not the same font, so try mixing things up.
Other than that, I love it! Great work!
Your game is to so interesting and well-made!
Though to make the scene of a lonely city to be realistic, place some trashes or garbage around the street.
I really appreciate your low poly, it really looks like a realistic lonely city.
Looks amazing! Keep up the good work.
Hello!
Honestly, good job on the Low-Poly style!
Low-Poly usually means something more cartoony, something more colorful and just really light.
You made a city street, and worked with more realistic lighting and models. I really, really like the style of it, the lighting makes it more realistic than it already it, well done!
The style looks very nice, gives me some memories from New Vegas in Fallout NV
For some feedback, following the idea that someone gave above on adding trash on the street, you could maybe add some details on the walls to give the impression of bad maintenance, also, the water puddles maybe could benefit from a little white brick to give the impression of something reflective (not sure if it would look good tough, might have to test it)
Just explored around your showcase and I can say it’s really beautiful to look at. You did a good job on the modeling, however I do have a few suggestions.
Since it’s a lonely showcase I would definitely try adding some trash all over the street are possible at some dirt on the walls to make it feel lonely you could make one of the street lights flicker on and off, depending if it looks neat to your showcase just a suggestion you should try using. Dust particles can be floating around the street area, and it would be a splendid idea by including that on your small showcase.
Overall the showcase is amazing, but try to place some dirt or more art on the empty wall when you join the game I definitely think that could be improved anyways you have an interesting showcase well done.
