FeedBack on a Mini Obby I started creating

So recently I have been working on a small obby or mini obby that is pretty hard to beat if you are a decent obby player.

I would like some feedback on how I can improve it, like in design
Here is the link to the game: https://www.roblox.com/games/9276703093/Steeple-Of-Divine-Jumps

And here is a video of me beating the obby, therefor proving that it is possible.

This is one of the first obbies I have made.
So tips, or constructive criticism will be accepted

Note: do not play it if you easily get angry, or not
at-least decent at obbies.

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Looks good, nice work. Especially if this is one of your first obbies created.