Feedback on a modern homestore

I recently made a modern homestore but need some feedback on the exterior and pricing. The homestore looks a little plain on the outside. I’ve added benches and trees but it still looks kind of empty.

Here are some pictures:
Roblox homestore

Roblox homestore 2

Roblox homestore 3

Roblox homestore 4

Roblox homestore 5

Roblox homestore 6

Roblox homestore 7

Please give some feedback! :smile:

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Decent build so far, but the modern architecture doesn’t seem to be implemented to the structure of the building. It’s needs textures proper materials, grids on the windows ect.

It’s not bad nor good! I’d say some of the ways to improve the build in general way is having small details that would really make everything pop out. Your home store is here and there but modern stores feature textures and a warmer color pallet l and the decrease the amount of open windows. I think there’s more things you could include in the home store, maybe place some interior decoration like shelves, clothing stands, circular tables, ect.

I wouldn’t really focus on that because the home store lacks details and proper features.

Try using reference images to help you find a proper structure and design or layout, for example (here is a image of a (“Modern HomeStore” you could possibly use for inspiration built by @itZAKU).

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Thanks so much for the feedback! :smiley:

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I’d say add more support under the building. That wood dock/pier doesn’t look anywhere near strong enough to hold it up

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Looks wonderful! I would visit both of them.

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The lighting could be worked on and improved to match the scenery of the homestore.

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It looks good so far! You should probably build more terrain around the dock (it looks way too empty). For the lightning add SunRays and ColorCorrection. Play around with the tint color for the ColorCorrection to see which one looks good to you!

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Little tip. Go into the Explorer. Then go to Workspace > Terrain. In the Terrain properties, there is a value called WaterTransparency. Turn that to 1. If u put ur graphics 7 or above, the water will look really nice.

Also consider changing the skybox and Adding a SunRays instance to Lighting to make it more realistic.

Other than that, it’s really good!

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