Feedback on a Mystic Temple I built

Let me know what do you thing of my new build. It’s a small sanctuary I built for my Rpg game.

Suggestions appreciated :hugs:

Edit: World building - Roblox
Here’s the link of the building if you wanna see it yourself

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It Look beautiful! I Love Status on the Side and the colourful Ring ON the ground. Have you Made it by your self (in roblox studeo ore in Blender🤔)?

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The wise mystic temple. Very good build.

Credits BurhMoment

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Ty for your reply,

Made it in Roblox Studio using a mesh pack.

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thank you, wdym “credits BruhMoment”?

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This mystic temple looks great! Nice job on it! I like the style of the temple! How long did this take to make? What game will it be used in?

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Tysm! It took around 10 hours (I think), it will be used for my future RPG game!

posted the link to the map so you can also hear the music

It looks overall very good. I just have 2 suggestions:

  • If the temple is supposed to be ancient, you could add some vines and broken stones/pillars. :herb::classical_building:
  • I don’t know what the dark liquid is supposed to be, but you could make it a bit more lighter or just turn it into neon :milky_way:
    Overall it’s quite impressive.

ummm…

cannot check it out.

mmhh that’s strange…
Screenshot 2024-08-27 223247
what is wrong with Roblox?

I think i fixed it you can retry if you want

the dark liquid is supposed to be a pond of Dark Element as opposed to that of the Light Element right next to it, its material is neon but it doesn’t glow because I think the color si too dark. I will definetly add some vines and vegetation to make the scene more natural and relaxing. Thank you for you helpful feedback :hugs:

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