Feedback on a Realistic Bedroom (based on a real bedroom)

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#1

Hey there my fellow developers!

Recently I planned on improving my modeling skills since I was lacking some knowledge, in my opinion. I redid the donut tutorial by BlenderGuru (very useful) and then started working on a whole different level (it’s an attempt). It’s not completely finished yet, but I would need some feedback!
Upcoming list:

  • Mouse
  • Some wires from the monitor and keyboard
  • The PC (the computer case and stuff in it)
  • Decoration

I need as many feedback as possible!

Pictures of the room:

Kyanroom
Kyanroom1920×1080 2.54 MB
Kyanroomsideview
Kyanroomsideview1920×1080 2.65 MB

Donut picture

donut_level2
donut_level2900×900 485 KB

And yes, I’ll try to export most of it to Roblox.

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#2

Really Good! I Love the Detail, Textures, And Shadowing. Great Job.

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#3

Looks perfect, keep up the good work Yorick!

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#4

Couple things to make it looks more realistic:

  • Normal maps please, it will make the desk look less smooth
  • The mattress and backboard seem really sharp?
  • Add a small bevel on the computer monitor
  • I just noticed this mess image
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#5

I can only say … perfect. It is clear that you have worked hard and have talent.

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#6

Alright, I’ll do the beveling on the monitor but the bed and the painting are like that in real life aswell!

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#7

Amazing!! Keep up your great job!

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#8

Desks are almost always smooth in real life. It doesn’t usually make a difference.

#10

Looks so good! What did you use to make these? How did you learn? So interested!

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#11

I used blender, and I learned most of it with the donut tutorial!
Here’s a link to the first episode of the tutorial series: Blender 2.8 Beginner Tutorial - Part 1 - YouTube

#12

Holy moly this is good. Keep it up! :+1: :+1: :+1:

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#13

The blue theme is very consistent. One tweak is a RGB mouse pad. And one question is that keyboard a Redragon Keyboard?