Feedback on a SciFi Room

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#1

Heyo there, Ray here! I hope you all are doing fine and are safe. Today, I had some free time in which, I built a small SciFi Room. It took me about 2hrs and 30mins to complete the whole build. It was a lil tough for me to get creative with a lil bit of stuff but yeah, I did complete it.

Keep in mind that I did use some mesh/models from toolbox to give a lil bit of more detailing to the room.

Here are some screenshots:
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I really hope that you guys like it and any feedback is appreciated.

Thank You for viewing this post and stay safe and healthy ^^

Link- SciFi Room - Roblox.

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#2

Hello ItzRayy,

my feedback is, that you build that actually really good, better then me. i recommend you using blender and learning to make meshes from it. then you’ll could build it better. that’s a super good building.

now here are my Rating Stars:

10/10

i think you’re builded that great. so, good job!

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OutrageousCode

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#3

Thank you so much for your feedback mate! I wish, I could learn blender but you know its kinda hard for me to learn hehe. Well ty for your feedback!

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#4

Hello there, Moose here
As mentioned by @OutrageousCode it is 10/10
I would also suggest getting better at the lighting
It does have a nice feel to it so if you can find music that flows with the game it would make the game very nice
Also sorry for not joining my roblox is being very annoying

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#5

Hello ItzRayy,

no problem dude. i think you maded this very well, as well with the lighting mentioned by, @Mooseblox12445, do some better lighting.

and no problem dude, try watch some youtube videos for learning blender. :slight_smile:

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#6

i am agree Mooseblox. he should do some better lighting.

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#7

It’s beautiful! You build well, good luck to you!
10 / 10

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#8

it is actually beautiful. he is actually a experienced builder then me. :laughing: :man_facepalming:

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#9

Sorry for low quality pic guys! It seems completely different in game for me.

#10

Thank you budy, appreciate it ^^

#11

Hm, I’ll try get better at lighting…

#12

customization your own lighting. that would make the game better. i recommend you, use the baseplate 2021 lighting, would’ve been useful.

#13

Sorry for that if I was sounding a bit rude I’ve been working on making my wording better

#14

I’ve completed the build. You guys can check it out now!

#15

cool but missing needed textures to make it look cool