Feedback on a well

Hello, I just finished building this well for absolutely no reason and I am just looking for feedback. And I did not use any mesh everything was made in Roblox Studio.

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It looks pretty good, however:

In terms of style, I’d say to make it fit in with terrain a bit more.
This can be done by desaturating either: the terrain, the well, or both.

Another thing to consider is that if your game is going for a low-poly and toon aesthetic, smooth terrain may not be what you are after since we don’t have enough control over the look of terrain yet. Even after editing the color, you may find the textured terrain clashing with your untextured builds more often than you’d like.

– Lev

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It’s not a game it’s just a random well I made to pass time. But I agree, I just loaded a new place with terrain not knowing what to do, that is why I made it with the terrain and was too lazy to remove it.

Overall this looks very good don’t get me wrong,

However, the top of the well (red stuff) isn’t really doing it for me, it doesn’t fit it well I guess you could say. The pink on the back makes it look a little bland, with the red not really matching up with it.

It looks very good, kudos to you on making one!

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You’ve done a really good job on the well!

I love how you’ve used a variety of different brick colours to make it look unique, especially at the bottom.

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It’s a really decent model you have made in my opinion, it looks like a medieval kind of well overall you’ve done a great job I have a couple of suggestions that you could improve on your model.

Well, in my opinion you should cover the bottom roof frame because a lot of low poly wells don’t have it showing out like that. You would see the frames holding the tiles up you could add some more tiles so it could cover the frame part I’ll leave an image below if you don’t know what I’m talking about.

Another thing you could work on is the roof tiles I don’t think the colors match in my opinion, I would try picking a different color such as wood, blue, light red, ect. You should try finding one that fits within the build, however that is just a suggestion you could try adding also the well stones are quite small I would try adding more so it could look a little better.

Overall, it’s a pretty neat model you have made, but there could be more things you could improve on it.

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