Feedback on Abandoned Asylum Showcase

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Hey everyone!

I am back with another showcase, this time a bit spooky… :no_mouth: I’d love to see what you think about it!

About the Build:

This build was inspired to me by a local YouTuber who lives close by to me by the name Exploring With Josh. I always find my self watching his entertaining videos about abandoned building’s; mostly because the history that was once in that building. So, after watching one of his hundreds of videos about hospitals and asylums I decided to create a showcase. I hope you enjoy it! :rocket: :ghost:

Game link: [DEV] Wanderer - Roblox

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Definitely a start to something.

I was a bit confused on what was happening, but I can definitely see some potential.

Keep it up!

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Well, the visuals are diffidently great. But the ghost and the hallway can be worked on, although I understand what you were going for.

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Oooo! This is awesome!

I love almost everything about this: The music, the building, everything!

You’ve done a really good job on it! :+1:

The showcase gave me SAW vibes and I don’t know why

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Really cool. Bit confused on what was happening but still very cool. Try to add textures to the walls and such to make it even look more worn down. Here some:
https://www.roblox.com/library/4870731734/Metal-Texture
https://www.roblox.com/library/4775362527/Dirt
https://www.roblox.com/library/4775363618/texture

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Really cool design, and it definitely shows potential! If I had to nitpick something, the “portal” or whatever you would call the white void you enter after touching the wheelchair, you can see the outline of the brick you used, where I think it would look better with the block not being visible, only the effect:BlockImage

But yeah, that’s really just a minor thing. This is a really neat showcase!

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Thanks for all the neat suggestions everyone! I’ll put them into consideration, and as always thank you so much for the feedback! :rocket:

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