I’d like to improve my build by asking for some feedback on it
I feel that my gas station is a bit bland, and I want to add something to it but I am not sure what to add. https://gyazo.com/df65891fbb3f59ac661a1d78916c0434
I have consulted some of my friends who are experienced with building, but I have not added anything to it.
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Hey! Maybe add a broken down car or something? That would look nice. Some graffiti too.
It looks like a good start, but it lacks detail. You should add some signs, and maybe some cracked pavement. The terrain could also use a bit of work, as well as color. Rust is typically darker, and the rust here is quite dark. Wood, plastic, and stone doesn’t rust so you should look into mixing materials in. Overall, good start.
Your gas station looks great, but one thing is that the station itself doesn’t look that quite abandoned. The station lacks a lot of detail.
I think this would look more abandoned if you added foliage to your scene such as grass, rocks, vines, trees. You could also add a rusted building with it so it could stand out more and. I think adding a concrete ground would make it look better. With some cracked pieces in it as well You should make parts of the station fall apart and it’d be even better!
As well, adding rusted vehicles to your gas station could make the scene look like it’s an abandoned gas station. Overall lastly, I would suggest you add a convenience store on the side of the station just to make it look more realistic. You could get an idea on what I’m talking about below!
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I do like the design of the abandoned gas station, but I do not many vibes of it being so.
A lot of people have provided great examples of some that would be great to look at, but I would like to point out some things of my own.
The main rust color you use is not as dark as rust or near it. It’s decent, but I see it too light of a color for rust.
Next, this looks like a futuristic gas station that happened to rust, not sure if you were going for exactly that, but it does in my eyes.
Lastly, there are just gas pumps there. If I were you, I would some type of small convenient store next to it just to give it that feel.
It looks like the gas station is in the middle of nowhere! Here is a few more problems:
- Too much rust
- Not much details
Looks alright. Try to follow what other people have said and I have one question, why have you added a “sunroof” in the middle of the roof?
All the others said, but I think you should have a style for it, like a 50s gas station or something from fallout