Feedback on abandoned structure!

[Yachemon (333十444゠777)]

Hello everyone, I’d like some feedback on this abandoned structure I made. I aimed to create a worn down old building in a nice environment to give off the effect of nature taking over. Feedback would be appreciated!

NOTE - Please pay no mind to the giant towers in the background, those were experimental builds.

[Happypigbaconalt]

Looks very cool! Would look really cool in a game

[Yachemon (333十444゠777)]

Thank you so much, I appreciate the kind words!

[Happypigbaconalt]

No problem, is this just a showcase or part of a real game? It looks like it could fit in and rpg game (based off the towers)

[Yachemon (333十444゠777)]

As of now its just a showcase, I do plan on implementing this into a future game however!

[Happypigbaconalt]

Yo sorry to keep on yapping but I just realized I’ve been talking to the same person on two different posts at the exact same time

[Yachemon (333十444゠777)]

LOL, yes Ive just noticed that aswell.

[Scottifly]

Not to be negative, but a few issues I see:

• I’ve never seen brick used at an angle like that. I can see that when you created the Unions you picked one of the tilted Negated Parts first, then the main wall Part, and then Unioned them. The first Part you pick in a Union operation is the one that the orientation of the final Union will align to so I’d recommend picking the main wall section first, then all the Negated Parts.
• I’ve never seen brick used as a roof material before IRL.
• The wood grain on your trees is running sideways.
• The low-poly look of the trees doesn’t really match with the detail of the building and the flowers.

[Yachemon (333十444゠777)]

Thanks for the feedback, I’ll use this to improve future and current builds!

[agentphilip07 (Philip)]

This abandoned structure looks VERY good! Nice job on it!