Feedback on admin system logo

ZoomSummit · January 10, 2021, 5:47pm

Hello, everyone.
I made this logo for an admin system (meaning something like Adonis) I plan to call TJNIS. My goals were to make the logo simple and slick. All feedback and constructive criticism is appreciated. Thank you for reading.

carlover38 · January 10, 2021, 5:48pm

That looks sick! maybe you could add an outline or something to improve it?

ZoomSummit · January 10, 2021, 7:26pm

Thank you! As with an outline, maybe something like this?

SnarlyZoo · January 10, 2021, 7:29pm

The only problem I see is on the S, some corners are round while one isn’t, also I say don’t do the outline, its too much, keeping it simple is better.

nonraymonable · January 10, 2021, 7:34pm

it looks like it says tunis, not tjnis

ZoomSummit · January 10, 2021, 8:24pm

Oh, you’re right. Thanks for pointing that out.

ZoomSummit · January 10, 2021, 8:29pm

Yeah, I agree about the outline. With your feedback, along with infiniteRaymond’s, how is this? (I think it looks way better than the original)