Feedback on ads

Hello! I am currently making a game and when once released I will purchase some ads.

Notice there will be a DEMO first.
Also there will be more, I thought making 2 and getting feedback to make more would be good.
And finally these ads will be played once released, meaning the game(DEMO) isn’t released yet.

The game:

Ad1:

Ad2:

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Also, (sorry) the style is a bit like FNAF 1’s Menu; the main character standing there with the title.

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ad2 is better because [ DEMO ] text ruins the ad1.

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I think I should make it smaller.

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What do you think of this?

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I really like the ads, but the text “Demo” shouldn’t be on the character

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ad looks nice. have you ever tried replacing the plain black backround with some other dark texture?

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I could consider that, like a glitch background?

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On Wednesday I plan to make the game public temporarily.

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yeah, sure. that sounds pretty nice

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Like this?:

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oh yeah that looks a lot nicer in my opinion.

great job

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