Feedback on Advanced Star Wars GFX

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I would like feedback on my most recent GFX. I used Cinema 4D, Roblox Studio, After Effects, and Photoshop.

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If you want to hire me or see more GFX you can see my portfolio here.

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I feel like you could’ve centered the point where the light sabers crossed. That would have made it look much better. But either way, it still looks amazing!

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Thank you so much for the feedback!

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Looks alright, although kinda hard to see what is in this area. image

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No problem!

30 characters.

That’s impressive as you have made a saber effect quality just as same as i5k does , Pretty amazing job done :+1:

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Looks absolutely insane! I wouldn’t have guessed that any part of that involved ROBLOX Studio if you hadn’t mentioned it.

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The lighting on the torso looks off, using a smear tool on the parts that don’t mix well can solve the problem.

Other than that, amazing work!

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Thanks for the feedback! I only used Roblox studio to export it. I didn’t rig it in studio.

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Looks great! The only thing that’s missing though is the red and the blue lightsaber emitting light around them, which is a tad disappointing and I do not see them anymore on the ground.

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