I am currently making a game called Streak Simulator. It’s a game in which you have gloves that when kill zombies or players, you consume the kills and get stronger.
You can play the game here: Streak Simulator [MAP VOTER] - Roblox
(I’ll take any critisism)
Happy Holidays!
I think that this topic will get taken down because there’s a rule saying “No ‘Rate my Asset’ posts,” so I will give some more feedback than what you’re asking.
I see several issues with the ad. First of all, the player with the streak doesn’t appear to be big enough to see very much change between 1 and 10. Additionally, the colors in the background seem Halloween themed, but they also seem to give it a feeling that your game is very limited. I suggest changing the background color.
The character in the 4 streak phases don’t appear to have a background at all and it looks like they are floating in air. On the 1000 streak, the picture clips into the phase 50 section, which gives the ad an outdated feel. The character also doesn’t appear to be expressing emotion, but I don’t look for this in an ad and I don’t care if the character has emotions or not. However, the character by itself does not look very fitting for this type of ad (it looks like something for Halloween). I suggest changing the character for each phase.
The picture also seems to have some sharpness applied to it. Removing it would make the image look better in general. In addition, the streak number is probably obscure so many people don’t know what it means. You should add something like “10 kills” to clarify what the streak is for.
The general layout of the ad is the most admirable aspect of the design. I don’t think it needs changing.
However, I don’t think the ad will perform very well. Take this with a grain of salt because I have no idea what is trending right now in the ad market since it is so diverse.
The first things you need to change are the background and image sharpness.
