Could you please take a look at the game below and provide some feedback. The map is for a survival type game on an alien planet but without the combat aspect. I know its flat but its supposed to be and cant be changed otherwise it will wreck the rest of my game.
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In my opinion, it’s alright. Nothing much to do, the only flaw is awful lighting. Change the lighting and it would be alright. I love the trees and mushrooms, a very nice touch. I would give it an 8/10, would give it a 10/10 but the lighting is the problem. Great map! 
Thanks. What was wrong with the lighting. To bright?
The truth is that this map seems incredible to me, only that the colors do not convince me much (in my opinion) also in the yellow part, let’s say mushrooms floating, if I don’t know, that’s why it’s very good 
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Kind of, but it also doesn’t adapt. Blue sky in a “space/alien” world. Doesn’t make sense, does it? I suggest making the sky dark and making the light of the map purple. It would be nice, I can give other tips if you like.
I agree also, the yellow neon parts of the mushrooms also doesn’t look settling for a blue mushroom.
Id love other Tips. because this is my first map that I’ve made so I don’t really know how I could make it better or what I could do with the rest of the map.
First map? Then I would bump my rating to 10/10 if that’s your first build. My first build was a baseplate and 2 blocks. You have high potential if you keep building and trying new things at building. I’m telling you, you are very talented if that’s your first build. I am assuming there is no free models in your first build.
Oh 
but to be your first map, it fits you very well, I think if you make some repairs, the map would look pretty good on you. I really congratulate you.
I changed the lighting and the colors of the map. If you’d like to check it out again.
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Great! I will be checking the game.
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I went to check it out and the lighting is the same. Maybe the server wasn’t updated, mind shutting down all servers?
First of all, it needs more detail.
It looks very plain and looks rushed, the trees and mushrooms is not enough.
I also notice that there was terrain, it would look better if there was some paths and grass.
Maybe add a crashed UFO.
And adjust the lighting like @Amanuel001 said.
Next time, please take the time to add details with your builds.
5/10
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I shut down the servers, should be updated now
Agreed! Also, a crashed UFO is an amazing idea, adds onto the space/alien theme. And about the terrain, you can make it more creative like changing it up a bit. But after all, this is their first build ever.
Thanks for the suggestion ill try adding more detail.
Yeah, the lighting is still the same. Have you remembered to hit the “Publish” button?
When you say lighting are you also talking about the sky box?
Yes. I am, it just makes the environment look off.
Ok i understand now ill change that up to give it more alien look
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