Feedback on an abandoned house showcase i did

Here are some images of the showcase:








Heres a link to the showcase if you want to play it: The home lost in spacetime - Roblox

So what do you think?

7 Likes

That looks, extremely, abandoned.

I’m not sure how I would feel if I had a dream where I’m in a place like this. It looks like its home to a very mental person.

Good Job!

2 Likes

Yeah i also thought of that when i finished it

Thanks for the feedback!

1 Like

It looks… horrifying–amazing job.
I agree it seems to be the home of someone with some very bad problems.

1 Like

10/10 would recommend

Hopefully I don’t have nightmares about a zombie apocalypse tonight…

1 Like

Looks nice. However, I think theres too much trash on the floor. Unless someone has been using the house as a dumpster for a long time, I dont think there would be that much trash.

1 Like

Excellent work! It would be very unnerving if you dialed down the brightness and gave the player a flashlight. Super spooky

1 Like

Very very nice! The details remind me of Resident Evil haha.

1 Like

Looks amazing, might look better with a few lightbulbs flickering

1 Like

Wow so realistic! Very good work!

1 Like

The whole build has great attention to detail, but the lighting doesn’t. The walls are well-decorated, but look a little plain because they’re not paired with more shadows. Maybe some darker accents around the lower areas of platforms would do your build some good, or a subtle vignette to draw attention towards the center focal point.

Overall, very good. Decrepit old house/10

2 Likes