Hello!
I am very new to making Roblox advertisements, and would simply just like some feedback on one of the first ads I made. I really consider it the first decent ad I made. That is because my first ad was made in MS Paint and was just a terrible sketch of a stick figure with a white background.
Feedback is always appreciated, but please make it reasonable. I really want to improve my skills in advertisement designing so I can eventually teach others.
Thanks!
This should go in #help-and-feedback:cool-creations.
I feel like its pretty good for a start, but I wouldn’t click on it.
It doesn’t look that aesthetically pleasing to me, and I feel like the background could be changed to make the text pop out more.
(I don’t click on any ad though, so don’t take it too personally.)
This is not bad at all for a first try.
The text and background caught my eye, so that’s off to a good start!
My only suggestion would be to make it seem a little less boring. Adding 4 limited items just seems off.
Instead, maybe you could create a GFX of people trading limited items to attract people’s attention.
If you can’t create GFXs, then I would suggest taking a screenshot of a character with a limited item on.
Basically, just something more than 4 pictures of a limited item.
You’re off to a great start, keep it up!
