Feedback on an Ice Cream Shop

Hey!

Me (building), @Volerien (programming), & @GalaxysProduction (vfx/lighting) created an ice cream shop. We were hoping for feedback on the quality & if the style is consistent. I also wanted some ideas on how to fill the empty space inside because it does have that feeling.

Here is the game: donut - Roblox

Feel free to give feedback on anything I did not mention above. Thank you! :grinning:

Not bad but the particle effect seems to be bugged:


Not too bad but it’s just a nitpick.

It looks great though, I would recommend adding more the the build as it looks pretty bland. Maybe just designs on the wall and such stuff.

Looks super cool!

My only stylistic recommendation is a different ceiling texture - while it works, it doesn’t feel like it matches the atmosphere of the rest of the building, which is more lively and upbeat, contrasting heavily with the concrete portion at very least.

You could additionally fill the empty space above the counter with some menus, similar to how many modern fast food restaurants have things (I get the difference in this situation, being an ice cream shop, however you could optionally put regular signs up instead - Dunkin attached for reference).

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